Thursday, June 17, 2010

Okay, i perfected these lyrics. Opinions?

Two hours listening to the Velvet Underground resulted in this little diddy:



No, no, baby, I know what's right



You were talking in your sleep last night



Said that it was a special kind of place,



And that everything's alright.



It's alright.



Marilyn



Your hair's the same color as your skin



Gorgeous Marilyn



Missy Marilyn, you know that's not where I am.



Watching people under me



Watching people under me



First floor people walking under me



I'll spit on their heads.



What do you want, Marilyn?



What do you want to be?



a supermodel for your glossy magazines?



Or do you want to spit on people's heads,



With me?



With me?



Something's got it's hold on me



And I don't know what



Something's got it's hold on me



And I don't know what



Get you to hold on to me



And I don閳ユ獩 know what



I don閳ユ獩 know what.



No, no, baby, I know what's right



You were talking in your sleep last night



Said that it was a special kind of place,



And that everything's alright.



It's alright.



Okay, i perfected these lyrics. Opinions?

I'm glad you have taken an interest in poetry . I like it !



It needs a Lil' polish!



Something that's helped me ...is a little voice activated



tape recorder.



You have a way of expression...that is all yours!



Sometimes we are our own best critic!



You pour out your heart in your poetry....



It's like painting a picture, only with words!



Okay, i perfected these lyrics. Opinions?

never post stuff on the internet without proof of ownership, if someone likes this, its good as stolen

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