Saturday, November 28, 2009

Is this good lyrics for a song?

- when i first saw you



- And i looked you in the eye



- i knew that u were sum 1



- that i with be with 4 a long time



- and whenever i see you



- i kno that im fine



- and as long as with you



- I'll always love you



- cause when your brown eyes smile at me



- when your black hair looks at me



- i wanna just hug you



- cause your everything 2 me



and then the prechorus is:



-cause in my dreams



- i think of u



- and i really wanna b with u



-cause in my dreams



- i think of u



- and i really wanna b with u



Is this good lyrics for a song?

i like it!!!



it is the kinda song u crank the radio up and sing a long to the sond!!!



[ if no one is in the car at least 4 me! ]



Is this good lyrics for a song?

This sounds too familiar to the song below.



Listen to it.



Is this good lyrics for a song?

gayyyy



Is this good lyrics for a song?

how can black hair look at u?



yeah is kinda cute but needs more words to make it cuter and stronger... now its a bit weak and boring



Is this good lyrics for a song?

its okay but needs a little fixing.

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