R these good lyrics?

when i first saw you

- And i looked you in the eye

- i knew that u were sum 1

- that i want to be with 4 a long time

- and whenever i see you

- i kno that Its true

- and as long as were together

- I'll always love you

- cause when your brown eyes smile at me

- when your black hair shines at me

- i wanna just hug you

- cause your everything 2 me

and then the prechorus is:

-cause in my dreams

- i think of u

- and i really wanna b with u

-cause in my dreams

- i think of u

- and i know our love is true

R these good lyrics?

Yes they are good lyrics, and may be the beginning of a great song. Remember when writting the second verse to keep your rhyme sceme going, don't get stuck having every line end with a u sound. To keep the rhyme sceme either rhyme the 1st and 3rd lines, and the 2nd and 4th, or the 1st and 2nd, and the 3rd and 4th. but also keep in mind it doesn't even have to rhyme at all if you have a story line that flows well. Also when writting the chorus it is usually good to have the tempo at a faster/or slower pace than the verses. If the verses are sung slow the chorus should be faster and vice-versa, or it can be the same tempo with with a completely different flow to the way the words are sung. Good luck.

R these good lyrics?

they're cute and if put to a good tune i would so buy it, send me a demo sometime

R these good lyrics?

There are good, needs to have the right music with them though to make it sell. Love to hear the demo.....

R these good lyrics?

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...