Are these good lyrics for a song?

- when i first saw you

- And i looked you in the eye

- i knew that u were sum 1

- that i with be with 4 a long time

- and whenever i see you

- i kno that Its true

- and as long as i'm with you

- I'll always love you

- cause when your brown eyes smile at me

- when your black hair shines at me

- i wanna just hug you

- cause your everything 2 me OR and never let go

and then the prechorus is:

-cause in my dreams

- i think of u

- and i really wanna b with u

-cause in my dreams

- i think of u

- and i know our love is true

Are these good lyrics for a song?

.. it would sound better if you say :

when i first saw you

- And i looked into your deep brown eyes,

- i knew that u were sum 1

- that i wanted forever %26amp; every time,

- and whenever i see you

- i kno that Its true

- and as long as i'm with you

- I'll always love you

- cause when your brown eyes smile at me

- when your black hair calls me

- i wanna just hold you

- and never let go

and then the prechorus is:

-cause in my dreams

- i see u

- and i really wanna b with u

-cause in my dreams

- i see u

- and i know my love for you is true

- and i always wanna be with you

Are these good lyrics for a song?

ya :) i like this :)

Are these good lyrics for a song?

it sounds like every other love song out there,

it doesn't have any original rhyme scale.

but it's sweet, it all depends on what you want to use it for.

Are these good lyrics for a song?

cute but kinda corney...sorry

Are these good lyrics for a song?

send me a copy of the words and music at bigmuddyfoot@yahoo.com

Are these good lyrics for a song?

they r gr8

Are these good lyrics for a song?

very nice but one thing u only tell about ur feeling share ur partner feeling vth it that she also love u add some line that show that both person love each other